“Um… are you sure that ah’m qualified for this job, boss?” Jesse asked as he looked up at his owner with a mix of confusion and worry. “I don’t know if chickens are really mah specialty…” Jack stared down at Jesse with exasperation as he proceeded to rub his temples. He wasn’t sure what Jesse was so worried about, given the relative ease of this latest assignment. “Look, you kept getting all jittery when I sent you to watch Noelle, Jacqueline and the sheep. So I’ll have to have you guard over something else.” He got down on one knee and gave the concerned beagle a look of sympathy. “Don’t worry so much, all right? Trust me, no one ever even tries to steal our chickens. This should be an easy one for ya.” Jesse looked up at his owner and slowly began to smile. “Well… ok then Jack. Ah’ll try my best, and ah promise I won’t let you down.” As his master stood up and walked off with a smile, Jesse turned around and looked at all of the chickens as they wandered around in place. “Ya know
I do htf tgs and tfs. So I guess if you got something good like Disco Bear to Toy Chica. Or Flippy to Flipsy. Feel free to let me know because I'm open for ideas.
One concept I'd like to see in more abhorrent admirer stories is a love triangle where you have the male lead, the woman he finds ugly or obnoxious (or both) and the gorgeous woman he's really in love with. I think it makes the story more interesting if the protagonist loses the beautiful woman he loves and realizes that not only has he lost her forever, but he also has to spend the rest of his life with the woman he finds unattractive. A bonus would be the beautiful woman being led to believe that the man really loves the abhorrent admirer and wondering what the hell he sees in her.
Indeed!
Another concept I like in these stories: the unattractive abhorrent admirer who thinks her lover thinks she's beautiful and then wears the supposedly most outrageously short, sensual, and erotic clothes possible in an attempt to please him... whereas he's only disgusted when she does this and is deeply embarrassed when she does this in public.